FEEDBACK FOR DIGIPAK PRESENTATION

After presenting my digipak to the class I got various feedbacks from them.

They said that they like the idea of the digipak telling a story and the track listing.
They also like the setting used in the digipak because it goes well with the genre of my music.
They liked the black and white effect and the fact that there was a reoccurring theme across the digipak.

They suggested that I change the font because they could hardly read it. They also said that the picture used in the inner panel (the bloody hands) is too graphic.

 This is something I really likes because it provoked a strong response from the audience and that is what I want my music video and digipak to do.

They also said that I need more variety of pictures because I had one picture on both sides of the inner panel. They also suggest that I re shoot the picture for the front cover because the one I have is too blurry. 

I decided to take more photos in the day and edit them on Photoshop because the one I had was taken in the night and might have added to the reason why it wasn't very clear.

VIDEO FOR DIGIPAK PRESENTATION

1ST DRAFT OF DIGIPAK PRESENTATION

FEEDBACK ON PITCH FOR MUSIC VIDEO

The feedback shows that the record label and the song choice is a good fit for the music video. They also said that I used detailed audience research in my preparation and I showed how that affected my music video. They also said that I should state that my target audience is a niche audience.

They said that the narrative of the music video was good and the history of the band was very believable. 

However, there was some concerns. They said that I should check what the law says on showing self harm in a music video because they felt it might promote self harm. They were also concerned with that age of my target audience (14-22) because they felt that 14 was too young to be stereotyped as emo. 

I did some more research and found out that there were indeed some 14 year olds that are stereotyped as emo, although they are very few. This also feeds into my idea of the niche audience.

PRESENTATION OF PITCH FOR MUSIC VIDEO

PITCH FOR MUSIC VIDEO

MUSIC VIDEO IDEA

This animatic video shows elements that will be portrayed in my music video.

                              

FIRST DRAFT OF DIGIPAK

FIRST DRAFT INNER PANEL

The inner panel is like a story. The two ends are of people holding the candles and the middle picture is a of someone with a bloody hand. The inner panel is like a continuity of the front cover, The front cover is a picture of the band and the inner panel is also of the band but it shows more about the band than the front cover. It gives the fans a medium that they can use to relate to the band.

FIRST DRAFT OF FRONT COVER

The front cover is of me and my band. The picture is in black and white and I am the only one in colour. I did this to emphasise that I am the only one that is real and everything else is just my imagination. This idea will be seen in the music video. 

I did it this way because I want my audience to connect with the band in a deeper way especially as it is a new band.

FISRT DRAFT OF TRACK LIST

This is the first draft of my track list, when I finish the first draft of the digipak I will then do some audience research and see if the digipak appeals to my target audience.

The track list is on a tomb stone with bloody hands on the top of it. The track are written in a bloody font. This track list is similar to the digipak. The theme across the digipak is "graveyard".

JOURNAL ENTRY

Today in sinead's lesson we continued on our digipak.  We were suppose to use this lesson to plan when we are going to do the photo shoot but I have already done my photo shoot so I started making my digipak in this lesson.

I stared with my track list and I finished the first draft in the lesson.

BLOG FEEDBACK

In our lesson Leanne went through out blogs and gave us feedback.

She said my blog was good but I should add some explanation to them so that when it is being read the audience will know why and how it will relate to my music video or my genre.

DIGIPK IDEAS

This is my idea for my digipak. I want it to be funeral themed and the genre of music to come across through the digipak.

The front cover will be a picture of me and my band mates in a graveyard. The picture will be in colour but my band mates will be in black and white. This will convey the idea of hallucination and show that something is not real.
The track list will be on a tomb stone with a bloody hand and blood dripping from the hand.
The band logo will be on the cd and it will be like a puzzle piece. The cd will complete the band logo and when the cd is taken out there will be a picture of me and my band mates.
The spine will have my band name, the record label and everything that is suppose to be on a typical digipak spine.
The digipak tells a story because when you open it it reveals a picture of me soaked in blood screaming and there are candles everywhere. That scene will be in a church and that goes with the funeral theme. There will be people holding candles on the other sides but it will be in a dark lighting and their silhouette or  a very dark picture o f them will be seen.
That entire scene goes from light to dark.
The people wearing black, holding the candles and the Church scene goes well with my theme , funeral.

JOURNAL ENTRY

Today in Sinead's lesson we were asked to make a plan on how we want our digipak to look like. We were told that even if we work in a group the way we arrange our digipak will be different. 

We had to draw the design on a paper that we folded to look like a digipak and we were to explore different ideas and designs and also the diferent theme we want for our digipak. 

I decided that I want my to be funeral themed.

I was also told to play around with my band logo and see what I can create to make it look better that it is.

AUDIENCE RESEARCH ANSWERS

This a result of the questionnaire I posted on Facebook so that my target audience will fill out and I will see if it matches the stereotypical views of the genre.

The result shows that I an on the right track and my audience profile music choice and mood board matches the stereotypical emo genre.

AUDIENCE RESEARCH (MUSIC VIDEO)

In order to make sure that I created an accurate audience profile I did some audience research and as part of my audience research I created a questionnaire that I gave to my target audience.
When I get the result from the questionnaire I would then know if it matches my target audience, and if by any chance it doesn't, I will then know what I need to change for it to suit my target audience perfectly.

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AUDIENCE PROFILE

I created an audience profile for my target audience. It consists of the things I feel my target audience are interested in and their stereotypical demographics and psychographics.

I also created a questionnaire that will be handed out to my target audience to see if they fit into my Psychographics and demographics.

JOURNAL ENTRY

This week we started making our audience profile and we where asked to start planning our audience research over the weekend. The audience profile should include a questionnaire, interview of audiences that will fit into your audience profile and that research should be acted on by the next lesson. We also completed our digipak analysis and conclusion in Sinead's lesson and we did the green screen analysis.

GREEN SCREEN ANALYSIS OF DIGIPAK

The green screen analysis was for the band Ce Digest and the video is of a poor quality because the day I filmed it i was wearing green and I didn't realise that till I was editing and found out that I couldn't edit it well because it will cut some part of me off. So I decided to edit it leaving some of the green on so that I will fully show in the video.

DIGIPAK ANALYSIS OF OTHER BANDS SIMILAR GENRE TO MINE

OTHER INTERESTING DIGIPAKS

KESHA (Cannibal album)

This digipak is from Kesha's cannibal album and I chose it because I felt it was done in the true image of the artist. The front cover of the digipak had Kesha's face slipt in a design like it is sewn on. The two pictures are different and but they are put together gruesomely and that conveys they idea of the album and it also corresponds top the music the album is based on, "Cannibal".

DISTORTURE

This digipak has the same theme through out and it is very simple in how it is dome. The picture of the band is not shown and this I feel is why the album is targeted for fans only. The bloody theme is not very well portrayed through out the album but that is not what the band is bout and if someone who is not a fan sees this they wouldn't be able to tell what type of music the band does and that is something I wouldn't want to incorporate in my digipak.

CEDIGEST

This digipak is a very good example of how I want my digipak to look like. There is no picture of the band members on the digipak and this shows how they are marketing the digipk and how it is just for their core fans. There is a similar theme across the digipak and that theme follows the codes and conventions of emo rock. If someone who is not a fan of the band or has never even heard of the band sees this digipak they will have an idea of what type of band they are and what genre of music they do.

ENSLAVED (Vertebre album)

This digipak has a similar theme and the picture of the band members are shown but the lighting used in very low. This digipak conveys the genre of the music very well and non fans will be able to tell what genre of music this is from looking at the digipak. Although this is very well done it is still a bit normal, there is no wow factor and that is something I want to do to mine.

A DAY TO REMEMBER

This is very graphic and when it opens fully, the pictures are like puzzle pieces, when put together they form one big picture. I chose this digipak because I felt it had a unique aspect of it (the pictures as puzzles) and that is something I want to do to mine, not necessarily puzzles by making mine have an wow factor.

CONVENTIONAL ELEMENT AND INNOVATIVE IDEA (DIGIPAK CONCLUSION)

The digipaks that I looked which were of the same genre to mine had continuity in the them and they all had elements in it that follows the codes and conventions of rock. They were all done in different ways and that is because they are just fro their fans.

The Avenged Sevenfold digipak I analysed was the one that stood out the most and that digipak is only for the fans that know what the band is about and would be the only ones that will be able to recognise that the digipak id from that band.

I also liked the way Bullet for my valentine's digipak was done. This was done in a way that told a story. The front cover is the picture of an abandoned house with crows flying around and the clock on the top of the house looked like it was hot at. It goes very well with the idea of the album and the songs in the album. The album was based on the song "scream aim fire" and the clock looked like it was shot at. That scene continued inside the house. The crows were still flying around and then the side cover is like a door that opens to reveal the band members.

The digipak I chose for My chemical romance is one the three they released. This is very different to how other bands release their digipaks. They have 3 different digipaks for one album, the black parade album. This idea of marketing is very creative and that is something I want to do to my digipak.

Another band that did a similar type of marketing with their digipak is 30 seconds to mars. The band has a symbol that the fans identify with and that logo which is called a "triad" was made into puzzle pieces and and part of the pieces was put into a digipak. The fans have to buy all the digipaks to get the complete picture. This is something I want to do with my digipak. I will make my symbol into puzzle pieces and put them across certain digipaks. 

The idea of the symbol wasn't inspired by this band but by a lot of bands of the same genre to mine. Most of those bands have a symbol that their fans identify with. In an odd way it brings the fans closer together.

After looking at the digipack analysis from other teams in my class did. I got an idea form one of the digipak. There was a picture of a man holding a picture and the picture was the complete part of a boy, it was half real half fake and I taught that was really cool. So I was to incorporate that into my digipak, I want either my band mate or me or just half of the picture to be fake and the other half real. This will convey the idea of the music video because in the music video the rest of the band are not real but to me they are real. This is been seen also in the digipak but the only difference is that the audience will not be able to tell which of them is real or which of them is not real just from looking at the digipak, they will have to watch the music video to be able to tell. That will be another aspect of marketing I will use.

I also decided to use a scene form the actual music video for the track list. I decided to use the the suicide scene when I cut my wrist and the blood drips into a paper with the band name on it. But in the digipak the blood will drip and form the track list.